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Name of show:
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Quote
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Explain
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EXT. CLEARING – DAY
Snow drifts across the bodies of the fallen dead. Eight corpses
lie frozen on the ground—men, women, and children, wearing heavy furs. The
wind whips through their long hair.
WILL
We should start back. They’re all dead.
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Slug line: tells us what’s going on
Action: Describes
Dialogue: tells us what people are saying
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Content
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WILL (20), A young ranger dresses all in black, surveys
the grim scene from the back of his gelding
Ser Waymar is gray-eyed and graceful, with an aristocrat’s
air of command despite his youth. He wears a supple coat of gleaming black
ringmail and a lush sable coat
Gared also wear the black night’s watch but his clothes
are far less regal, their leather and fur battered from hard usage. Gared
wears a hood for warmth
Moonlight shines down on the clearing, the ashes of the fire
pit, the snow covered lean-to.
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Will is introduced as a ranger and is shown first surveying
a battleground
Ser Waymar is described as a gentleman type of character
because the script describes him as graceful and describes all the posh
clothing he wears
Gared is described as a much rougher character than Ser
Waymar
The location is described as a nice area and a peaceful
area
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Narrative structure
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The others descend upon them.
CREDIT SEQUENCE
CLOSE on a pair of ancient, gnarled hands writing a
message on a small parchment scroll.
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The story is a Multi-stranded story because it goes from
Will and Gared to the old man and is linear so far because so far there has
not been time travel
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Genre
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JON SNOW
(Whisper) Keep the pony in hand. and don’t look away.
Father will know if you do.
Waymar and Will stand together, class distinctions forgotten,
two boys about to die
Gared’s head topples off the stump, bounces off a root,
and rolls.
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This quote makes me think one genre is drama because it’s
implying there could be arguments
This quote makes me think it’s action because the two boys
are being surrounded by the others
This Quote makes me think slight thriller because of the
violence
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Target audience
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I think the Target audience is young males who are young
adults or teenagers because of the violence in some scenes and the action in
some scenes.
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Name
of show:
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Quote
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Explain
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Style
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INT.
TYRELL CORPORATION LOCKER ROOM - DAY
It’s
magnified and deeply revealed. Flecks of green and yellow in a field of milky
blue.
LEON
Okay
if I talk?
LEON
What?
LEON
What
desert?
HOLDEN
Doesn’t
make any difference what dessert –- it’s completely hypothetical
LEON
But
how come I’d be there
HOLDEN
Maybe
your fed up, maybe you want to be by yourself who knows.
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Slug
line tells us where they are
Action
describes what’s going on with vivid detail
Characters
name
Characters
dialogue
The
script seems to have a lot of dialogue all at once and a lot of description
all at once they rarely cross dialogue then description then dialogue it
seems to just be dialogue – dialogue – dialogue or Description – description
- description
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Content
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LEON
Okay
if I talk?
Holden
doesn’t answer. He’s centering Leon’s eye on the machine.
Ten
years ago, DECKARD might have been an athlete, a track man or a
welter-weight. The body looks it, but the face has seen some time – not at
all good
THE
INSPECTOR is in his fifties. The deep creases in his face, the broken
capillaries in his nose say brawler, spoiler, drinker, but the diplomas will
say something else.
The
room is Large and humid. Rows of salvaged junk are stacked neatly against the
walls. Two large fans above their heads
Leon
looks shocked, surprised. But the needles in the computer barely mover.
Holden goes for the inside of his coat. But big Leon is faster. His LASER
BURNS a hole the size of a nickel through Holden’s stomach
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The
first time we hear Leon is him asking if it’s ok for him to talk which could
show Leon is a kind character or maybe scared of something
Holden
is implied to be a harsh character because he doesn’t reassure Leon
Deckard
is introduced by using words like athlete meaning he used to be a big sports
person but now he sounds old
The
inspector is introduced as a rough detective type character who could be
slightly corrupt as a cop because he is described as a drinker and brawler
This
location is described as an operation room
The
conflict in the script starts and ends very quickly and the script capitalizes
LASER BURNS to symbolize it’s a big part of the scene
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Narrative
structure
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LEON
Whatcha
mean, I’m not helping!
(Later
in the script)
DECKARD
Contact.
This is Blade runner one calling com-fast 27
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The
script of blade runner is multi stranded because it tells the story of Decker
and Leon at the start which are both separated.
So
far throughout the script Blade Runner has remained linear with no time
travel or flashbacks because the Leon scene happens first and then goes to
Deckard after that scene so no flashback
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Genre
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I-X-4-P-D
referred to as a Nexus-6, The Tyrell corporation’s new pride and joy.
INT.
INSPECTOR BRYANT’S OFFICE - NIGHT
But
big Leon is faster. His LASER BURNS a hole the size of a nickel through
Holden’s stomach
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The
genre seems to be Sci-Fi because all the numbers and made up names
The
film could also slightly be criminal investigation
The
film could also be action because of the way this is described
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Target
audience
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They
escaped from the colonies two weeks ago. Killed twenty-three people and
jumped a shuttle
The
Tyrell corporation has a demo model. Check it out on the Voight-Kampff.
There’s a chance the nexus-6 is beyond our ability to detect.
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I
think this film is mostly for male teenagers and male young adults
This
film also sounds like people who would like Sci-Fi would love this film
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Quote
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Style
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INT. MTROPOLITAN POLICE STATION. FRONT DESK M DAY
ANGEL doing an elaborate skid in a police car.
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The slug lines are incorrect because it gives a location in the time of day part
The font sizes and styles are correct
There are no metaphors from what I can see
The script looks normal with no unique parts etc
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Content
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Down an alley
They wear navy tee shirts and shorts
SERGEANT
Getting stabbed by Santa
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In this script they leave out long explanations for areas and give quick short descriptions of the areas
They give short fast descriptions of the characters
The dialogue has a lot of humor in it and is high quality
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Narrative structure
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Janine I'm being transferred. I’m going away for a while
See Angel outside the window on his mobile
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The story is centered around a police constable called Nicholas Angel and it follows him around and it involves Angel being transferred
The story is linear so far with no flashbacks etc
The story seems single stranded and centered around Angel
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Genre
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Just say yes thank you
Police constable Nicholas Angel
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Comedy because of the dialogue
I think the sub-genre is detective and mystery because the story is centered around
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Target Audience
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Stabbed by Santa
Angel, Inspector, Sergeant etc
A Jovial sergeant
You’re making us all look bad
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It seems to be around 12 - 17 because it's not made for children but not for adults
It seems more made towards men than woman because there is a lot of male characters
It looks like they didn’t have to use CGI etc however they had to spend a lot on costumes
The creators of this may have been inspired by other comedies
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